It's taken me 2 days to get this far, simply because I'm so utterly overwhelmed by who/what/where/WHY, I've already restarted a few times just to try and refresh who everybody is, and where they are at what times. This game has promise, and I'm looking forwards to moving beyond Day 5. The UI in that game is fantastic, and the game locations (and the people in it) are introduced in a logical manner so the player isn't overwhelmed right from the start, unless you choose the option as an experienced player. For the Dev, try playing, which is also a twine based game with similar magic, mind control, warlocks & witches, with sex everywhere premise. Insert a 'cheat' or option for experienced players to go whereever they want from Day 1, because they know what is happening.Ģ) A small name strip when someone is talking, a tiny image alone sometimes isn't sufficient.Īt the risk of it sounding slightly like I'm plugging another game.

Keep the map mostly locked, so they go to the correct places at the right times. Own is a similar word, also frequently applied in situations of debt, but has entirely different connotations related to slavery, or Master/Sub relationships.Ĭomplaints out of the way to improve the game some suggestions:ġ) Streamline the first 4 days so new players can better understand wtf is happening, and where they should be going. The English seemed mostly ok, the only issue I've encountered that was more 'funny' than bad English, is during a conversation between 'Jane' and player, where Jane was begging the player to introduce her to PC sister (Mia I think?) and the player says something like 'fine, I will do you the favour and you will OWN me later.' The correct word in this situation of debt is 'owe', as in 'you will owe me a favour later'. Ok, tried downloading this 2 days ago couple major issues right off the bat and Im only on Day 5 (just after finding out I have Voice of Command):ġ) There's WAY too many characters being thrown at the player in too short a time, and the UI isn't very clear on who's talking.Ģ) The MAP opens up way too fast, on Day 2 there's 3 different Streets, Lilac Drive, Washington Ave, College and the Beach.ģ) related to the points above, too much open-world too quickly, especially since there's also a time function and I've had several 'dates' where events like 'go meet X at 3pm, go meet Y at 4pm, go meet the neighbour after fixing her sink at 6pm, etc' all happen on the same day when I've barely started.

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(set:$location to 0)(display:'timemap')(display:'timelocalmap') The next game is going to have a similar theme of magic, corruption and transformation, but it will be a more serious game and with a lot less character (fifteen or so, unlike the 140 I have right now), I have been trying to avoid use some models that will be in the next game in Realms of Lust but I might have a few pop up. I will make some small changes to all the content to the now called Chapter 1 of the game (all the content until the 0.4.1 update).(if:$day is 3)[

I don't think I have the time right now, but as I said before I will release a 5.1 update before the 6.0, mostly for some content and features that are not needed but I would like to have in the game because the next week in-game will be very linar and no free roaming.

The main story is also ready so I will have a better idea of how much time it will take when I'm farther along in the process. Now about a date.I will give you guys a better estimate next Sunday, I just finished adding those dialogue boxes to the first area of the game, took only a day but It's extremely boring. The next game is going to have a similar theme of magic, corruption and transformation, but it will be a more serious game and with a lot less character (fifteen or so, unlike the 140 I have right now), I have been trying to avoid use some models that will be in the next game in Realms of Lust but I might have a few pop up. But I will also release the next game I have planned after the first release of chapter 3, maybe the same day maybe a month after I will have to see what I can do. I have also made a decision of how I intend to continue the content of the game after the main story is finished, I will copy the week 3 template and create a Chapter 3 that will have it's own content, and every month or so add more content for specific characters, like a sisters update (for Mia and Alice) for example, that way I won't over exert myself and you guys get some new content more often. I will make some small changes to all the content to the now called Chapter 1 of the game (all the content until the 0.4.1 update). Click to expand.I don't think I have the time right now, but as I said before I will release a 5.1 update before the 6.0, mostly for some content and features that are not needed but I would like to have in the game because the next week in-game will be very linar and no free roaming.

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